Hi again. This is another design idea I've been working on. I have a great course I've been working on for the last year in Saipan, a small island in the Pacific Ocean near Guam. Unfortunately, it's in a National Park, so I doubt they'd ever let me permanently install the course. As of now, I've been playing with a few friends weekly carrying my portable basket as we go.
I was very inspired by your article on designing Par 5's and have been trying out different ideas. This is my current design on hole 18 at the park. It is meant to be a gold level hole.
Sorry for the poor quality picture, I just drew it up in Microsoft Paint.
Feedback and critiques are what I'm looking for the most. I don't have many fellow Disc Golfers out here on the islands. Thanks.
Roclover, it looks like you've been doing a lot of serious thinking on course design, and I think you're definitely heading in the right direction. First on your par 5 idea.
I can see that you really "got" the concepts I wrote about in the magazine, and it looks like your hole could work pretty well. I think Chuck might ultimately be right about how many people would try it, and here's why:
1. The Eagle landing area looks pretty small. Could just be a scale issue.
2. There's a psychology about throwing a shot that's farther from the pin in order to get a better shot. That's counter-intutive, and it's a tough sell to get players to go that way. You're asking them to throw a shot that finishes away from the green -- it would be better if it were closer to the green.
Also, I thought your distances were pretty good, until I saw that you said it was designed for gold level. The holes I wrote about were more for blue, but gold players could go for the big shot -- that's what your looks like to me. My problem is when you say that the safe shot is a fairly open 300' drive, that's a bit shot for gold. Hope that makes sense.
Now here's my main concern. I really don't want to encourage people to make permanent holes like this that rely on big artificial OB areas. Obviously that's our call, and some people don't have a problem with it, but I'm just not a fan. In fact, I'm not much in favor of artificial OB for tournaments, except for the USDGC, which is a completely different animal.
Maybe the area you have marked as OB is naturally swampy or something, which would be different. But here's something that might be a more elegant solution: if you're committed to OB there, have the OB run from 300' to maybe 450', then anyone wanting to go for the Eagle can risk carrying the OB, and you can have a nice big landing area that's in line with the rest of the fairway.
As for your V green, I'm not sure I understand exactly what your vision is. My only comments would be that it sounds like there's a good concept at the heart. I get nervous when you talk about drives down the middle kicking into the water, and when you mention a skinny creek. Wider obstacles, be they trees or creek, will reduce flukiness.
Gotta run.